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Yosuga no Sora -Love Your Life by KahoOkashii Yosuga no Sora -Love Your Life by KahoOkashii
I dont know why but Sora is a special girl to me to FANART =___= Moar of Sora now !!

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:icontheteknician:
I usually don't put all 5 stars for critiques, but lately I have been seeing a lot of art that really doesn't need to be judged so harshly. Therefore, since I like the picture and see in infinitesimal amount of flaws, this shall receive all 5s.

As far as my criticisms go, they are equally as minuscule.

For example, the angle you chose calls for a change in geometry of the books and the picnic mat (which were both drawn appropriately).

The one thing that caught me off guard was the green blur at the top right. That blur (apparently leaves out of focus) just took a little while to figure out. If I didn't know any better, I would've assumed it was a blemish.

People may comment on the pockets of light that go through the tree and onto the girl (whom I had forgotten to mention was cute BTW) as unrealistic, but matters not. What matters is that this is a beautiful drawing of a beautiful girl in beautiful dress on a beautiful day.
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Wow, this is a great picture. It makes me happy that there are enough fans of this amazing, amazing anime to produce wonderful art like this. Sora, who is one of my favorite characters in the anime (and I think all of the characters in the anime are fantastic) simply because of how unique and well-developed she is, looks fantastic. I can seriously see something like this happening in the anime. In addition, your art style is very close to the actual anime, which is a nice touch.

Also, major kudos for actually managing to get her dress as detailed as you did. It's one of those things that simply catches your eye, you know?

However, I do have few minor problems with this. First off, I know this seems like a weird complaint, but I think Sora's legs are too wide. There are scenes in the anime where it shows that Sora has very skinny legs. Second, Sora's bunny toy is supposed to be black. It looks a tad too brown to me. Third, I know that thing in the background is supposed to be a tree, but it looks kind of smudged and doesn't mesh well with the rest of the picture. Finally, the light spot around the coffee cup looks kind of strange, but the other ones look fine.

On the whole, this is a beautiful picture, and I can definitely imagine something like this happening after the ending of the anime, with Sora and Haruka enjoying a nice picnic and each other's company. Considering that Sora's arc was so well done in my eyes, it's nice to see something like this set the gears in my mind working so that I can admire the relationship Haruka and Sora are so lucky to have. Well done.
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:iconprincesaflama34567:
princesaflama34567 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
very beautiful :kawaiidesuplz:
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:icon1197sbow:
1197sbow Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2013
This fanart is awesome! Each piece is truly wonderful. Great job! :)
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:iconricardoamorim0709:
RicardoAmorim0709 Featured By Owner May 25, 2013
cool! my favorite character
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:iconthe0ne-u-lost:
The0ne-u-lost Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Impeccable work truly outstanding.
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:iconrelic-angel:
Relic-Angel Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sora looks like a doll in this picture! :heart:
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:iconavianpain:
AvianPain Featured By Owner May 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahhh.. I love your awesome artwork! :D
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:iconyamiookamibrittany:
yamiookamibrittany Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2012
Is this an anime?? :D She's gorgeous! Your art is so cool~!
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:iconedaherz:
EdaHerz Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2012   Digital Artist
I love the bunny and her dress!! She's so adorable!!!
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:iconrobertvarulfur:
RobertVarulfur Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Fantastic artwork!
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2011
Lovely
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:iconkinguggi:
KingUggi Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Awesome ;)
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:iconsuimoke:
SuiMoke Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
wow, amazing colours...! ps: what is SAI?
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:iconkahookashii:
KahoOkashii Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Paint Tool SAI
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:iconsuimoke:
SuiMoke Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
thanks!
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:iconsirferrick:
SirFerrick Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Awsome Shadowing.
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:iconmikachusango:
MikachuSango Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Super cute^^
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:icondestroyersting:
DestroyerSting Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Very cute as usual :)
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:iconaxel13579:
axel13579 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
nice:D
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:icontsuikana:
Tsuikana Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
lllllovveee you!!! >.< i love how you do much yosuga no sora fan art!! you should do a sexy one of her and haru ;) unless you dont like that pairing ^^;
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:iconvocaloidwangyao:
VocaloidWangYao Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
It's cute!!~
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:icondragntrainer95:
dragntrainer95 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
đẹp q bạn ơi :D
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:iconkahookashii:
KahoOkashii Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
can on ban ^^

Ruu...
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:icondemoco:
Democo Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Student General Artist
Cute :)
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:iconlaucha95:
laucha95 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011
She's cute :love: I love the colors :) Nice job
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:iconmarivicita:
marivicita Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing! And only 5 hrs! O_o You are very talented my friend!
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:iconxdragon21:
xDragon21 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
its really pretty
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:iconsam1027:
sam1027 Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Hehe she's always adorable~~
And even a bit ECCHI of herself ((Plz I have watch the anime and really really understand what's up with her in the end @//x//@)
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:iconoku-mura-20:
Oku-murA-20 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2011   Traditional Artist
:D whos the cutie!
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:iconhamphield:
Hamphield Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
love the details... so natural...
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:iconthevocaloid1:
TheVocaloid1 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
Beautyful Painting :)
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:iconnintendork3:
nintendork3 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
very nice :)
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:iconmxmxm:
mxmxm Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
i nerded all over my floor ... it's nasty
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:iconjoakaha:
Joakaha Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Cute! ^.^
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:iconadriel13:
Adriel13 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Great shadow effects, dinamism and cuteness.
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:iconstormylegacy:
StormyLegacy Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Student General Artist
aww, shes so pretty! you did an amazing job! these are always the kind of artwork i look for. love it! <3
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:iconteturo:
teturo Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
Lovely ^_^
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:iconalmaleon:
almaleon Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
she is so cute!
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:iconkufukuu:
kufukuu Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Student Digital Artist
nice . :)
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:iconutawa:
utawa Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
thch ci vy vs con thỏ qu :">
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:iconkahookashii:
KahoOkashii Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
=)

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:iconlevia-the-dragon:
Levia-the-Dragon Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
Very innocently cute, wonder who she's looking up at.
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:iconsomvold:
Somvold Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
She's adorable and great job on the perspectives too.
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:iconwingsie:
Wingsie Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2011
( ▽`).。o♡
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:icontakarayume:
takarayume Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
ahhh the cuteness of this scene blinds me~! :faint: XDD
I love how you drew this~ so cute~! *Q*
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:iconodstfng:
odstfng Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011
beautiful work, especially love the shadows from the tree
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:iconjaniaabigail:
JaniaAbigail Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011
Very nice :)
Two critique comments: Hair still looks lifeless without more streaks in it. Also, the glares from the sun seem off... looks like she's under a tree but the shadow doesn't match the sun pattern and the blotches are too bright for being against non-shiny surfaces.
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LastCloudburst Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011
uềy, đệp qứ a uiz :">
thik mu :">
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:iconkahookashii:
KahoOkashii Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank e ^^

Ruu...
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LastCloudburst Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011
^^
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:icondart3127:
Dart3127 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2011  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Awesome! The expression matches her character. Even though she's not very expressive to begin with.
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