wow! (critique portion) I notice that the side-hanging lock of hair on her left side seems to be drawn a little far back which makes her ear seem as though it connects to the back quarter of her head rather than the middle and the foreshortening in her left hand is off, making it look a little flat and distorted. But the rest (and I mean the rest) is breath-taking! To be fair here, though, I've been struggling with drawing that hand gesture for years. I still can't get it right. Even with the things that could be fixed, I love this picture!
We can say this is amazing art work! The Color and effect is soft enough to make this girl look wonderful. And with special vision make this girl look so beautiful! (and also her eyes too, sweet and careful look ) The background is simple but with it the girl look even better. I like how you add the umbrella, the last thing i want to say is the detail of her kimono: with the dark color and those detail make everything look better! I think you should add more detail in her hair and a bit on the umbrella will be nice, this is just my opinion. thanks for reading.
the only thing i notice about this one is... the left eye looks a little different from the right one. and.... it might just be me.... but i think theres a little too much light up in the upper left corner of the artwork.