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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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The background is simple but with it the girl look even better. I like how you add the umbrella, the last thing i want to say is the detail of her kimono: with the dark color and those detail make everything look better!
I think you should add more detail in her hair and a bit on the umbrella will be nice, this is just my opinion. thanks for reading.
(critique portion) I notice that the side-hanging lock of hair on her left side seems to be drawn a little far back which makes her ear seem as though it connects to the back quarter of her head rather than the middle and the foreshortening in her left hand is off, making it look a little flat and distorted. But the rest (and I mean the rest) is breath-taking!
To be fair here, though, I've been struggling with drawing that hand gesture for years. I still can't get it right.
Even with the things that could be fixed, I love this picture!
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