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Aria no Utaby *KahoOkashii

Fan Art / Manga & Anime / Digital / Games

back from 2-week hiatus , Title : ARIA SONG

This is specially drawn for my best friend IRL and for ones who are being fan of ARIA

SAI + Photoshop CS3
Ruu...

Critique by ~Danijine96 Dec 25, 2011, 10:36:04 AM

Ok...where do I start? This deviation is simply beautiful and I can see how you put a lot of work into it.

There is just one little thing that I see that you may need to work on...it's the body and position of the girl. The girl's right hand is nicely done but the wrist of the left hand is a little to straight which messes up the fingers a little and makes the left palm a little too big....

But that doesn't stop this deviant from looking beautiful, I still like it...this is so going into my favorites

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Critique by *Intelman Oct 13, 2011, 5:59:50 AM

I haven't watched or read about Aria, but sure I know her character for a bit. To depict her playing a piano is sure a rare sight. Composition wise, you pulled a great one. Like the flow created by the positioning of those note papers and adding several blurred foregrounds. Empty space on the right side draws our eyes to just focus and look at Akari and her piano. Peaceful atmosphere which accompanies well with her overall characteristic well colored as expected from you. Now for the downside, this one's got a messy perspective. The piano, the chair, aria, floor+fence, and the wooden floor on the background, they're all in the different. And as a closing, although this has a great mood, the perspective mistakes really took away most of the impact of this piece.