Yosuga no Sora - Shunfuu

Viết critique cho anh thích ghê. Cảm giác như mình là nhà phê bình vậy.<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/><img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>
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-OK, i'll write in English so that people could understand what i'm saying. As usual, your background is wonderful. Also your blending and shading. I just love your coloring.
As i said before, critique include good and bad thing (sorry, bad English). The good thing like i said above. You color your pics perfectly as always. Now is the bad thing: The girl. Overall, she's outstanding. But her neck, her hand, her legs, those make her looks a bit fat to me. You should also shade the part inside the dress. Those aren't dark enough. The third thing, you might already know this, that you draw this TOO fast. 4 hours is a bit short to make this "wonder". And what will it cost, if you spend more time for this pics? The more time you spend, the more perfect the pics is. That's all i can say.
Well, i can't really complain anything about this pics. It's to great. And i wanna learn more from you so as to be like you. Better than you. So i'm looking forward to seeing more of your "wonder", senpai!<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>